From 18b65e2b0aa0a063ed09d4f464d8ab4dc2231898 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Schafer <greg@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Tue, 16 Sep 2003 04:25:50 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor edits.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2824 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml | 3 +--
 chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml | 4 ++--
 chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml      | 2 +-
 index.xml                         | 4 ++--
 4 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
index 799f7ad00..5701e5960 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -53,8 +53,7 @@ statically.</para></listitem>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Now already prepare the linker for the "locking in" of Glibc later
-on:</para>
+<para>Now prepare the linker for the "locking in" of Glibc later on:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make -C ld clean
 make -C ld LIB_PATH=/tools/lib</userinput></screen></para>
diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
index 3bd5f1d4b..5a5fd5571 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ variables that override the default optimization flags.</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Now already prepare Binutils for the re-adjusting of the toolchain in the
-next chapter:</para>
+<para>Now prepare Binutils for the re-adjusting of the toolchain in the next
+chapter:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make -C ld clean
 make -C ld LIB_PATH=/usr/lib:/lib</userinput></screen></para>
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
index 00be02adc..a36310b2a 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen></para>
 purpose of this switch is to remove <filename>/usr/local/include</filename>
 from <userinput>gcc</userinput>'s include search path. This is not absolutely
 essential, but we want to try and minimize the influence from the host system,
-so this seems a logical thing to do.</para></listitem>
+so this is a sensible thing to do.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><userinput>--enable-shared</userinput>: This switch may
 seem counter-intuitive at first. But using it allows the building of
diff --git a/index.xml b/index.xml
index 96919f4b2..2dcc2f1f8 100644
--- a/index.xml
+++ b/index.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 				"/usr/share/docbook/docbookx.dtd" [
 
 
-<!ENTITY version "20030914">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "September 14th, 2003">
+<!ENTITY version "20030915">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "September 15th, 2003">
 <!ENTITY nbsp " ">
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">