From 0ea8a70130a4b448a4fe56b322c320f3574a15e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 18 Apr 2018 19:07:47 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Punctuation updates from Kevin Buckley

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11403 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 appendices/dependencies.xml | 78 +++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)

diff --git a/appendices/dependencies.xml b/appendices/dependencies.xml
index 3b34951fb..d4082c2fc 100644
--- a/appendices/dependencies.xml
+++ b/appendices/dependencies.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Coreutils, Sed, Tar, Vim</seg>
+          <seg>Coreutils, Sed, Tar, and Vim</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Acl, Libcap</seg>
+          <seg>Acl and Libcap</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
           <seg>Binutils, Bison, Bzip2, DejaGNU, Diffutils, Expect, Findutils,
-          Flex, GCC, Gettext, Gzip, Libtool, and Tar.</seg>
+          Flex, GCC, Gettext, Gzip, Libtool, and Tar</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -260,8 +260,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, File, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
-         Make, Perl, Sed, Texinfo and Zlib</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, File, Gawk, GCC, Glibc,
+         Grep, Make, Perl, Sed, Texinfo and Zlib</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, Diffutils, Findutils, Man-DB, and Eudev</seg>
+          <seg>Bash, Diffutils, Eudev, Findutils, and Man-DB</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Perl</seg>
+          <seg>Perl</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Procps-ng,Psmisc</seg>
+          <seg>Procps-ng and Psmisc</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, GMP, Grep, Make,
-         MPFR, Patch, Readline, Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         MPFR, Patch, Readline, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
           <seg><ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/Graphite">CLooG-PPL</ulink>,
-               <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/GNAT">GNAT</ulink> and
+               <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/GNAT">GNAT</ulink>, and
                <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/Graphite">PPL</ulink></seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -874,7 +874,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Grep, Make, 
+         and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -981,8 +982,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, M4, Make,
-         Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
+         M4, Make, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -998,7 +999,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>MPFR, GCC</seg>
+          <seg>MPFR and GCC</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1017,7 +1018,7 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Make</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, and Make</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1025,7 +1026,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Expect</seg>
+          <seg>Diffutils and Expect</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1169,7 +1170,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Less</seg>
+          <seg>Diffutils and Less</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1375,7 +1376,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Bison, Coreutils, Flex, GCC, Gettext, Glibc,
-         Gzip, Make, Sed, Xz-Utils, Zlib</seg>
+         Gzip, Make, Sed, Xz-Utils, and Zlib</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1446,7 +1447,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Attr, Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Perl, Make, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Attr, Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Perl, Make,
+         and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1561,7 +1563,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Autoconf, Automake, Findutils</seg>
+          <seg>Autoconf, Automake, and Findutils</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1588,8 +1590,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Bc, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
-         Gzip, Kmod, Make, Ncurses, OpenSSL, Perl, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Bc, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, GCC, Glibc,
+         Grep, Gzip, Kmod, Make, Ncurses, OpenSSL, Perl, and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1803,7 +1805,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, GMP,
-         Make, MPFR, Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         Make, MPFR, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1839,7 +1841,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, GMP,
-         Make, Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         Make, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1855,7 +1857,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Gawk, GCC</seg>
+          <seg>Gawk and GCC</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1891,8 +1893,8 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps-ng, Psmisc, Readline, Texinfo,
-          Util-linux, and Vim</seg>
+          <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps-ng, Psmisc, Readline,
+          Texinfo, Util-linux, and Vim</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1911,7 +1913,7 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Python</seg>
+         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, and Python</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1946,7 +1948,7 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Make, Perl</seg>
+         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Make, and Perl</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2088,7 +2090,7 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, and Make</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2158,8 +2160,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses,
-         and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make,
+         Ncurses, and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2247,7 +2249,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, Gawk</seg>
+          <seg>Bash and Gawk</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2327,7 +2329,7 @@
         <segtitle>&external;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Acl, Attr, Cracklib, PAM</seg>
+          <seg>Acl, Attr, Cracklib, and PAM</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2553,8 +2555,8 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, Gawk, GCC,
-         Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses, Sed, Eudev, and Zlib</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Eudev, Findutils, Gawk, GCC,
+         Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses, Sed, and Zlib</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2660,7 +2662,7 @@
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Glibc, and Make.</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Glibc, and Make</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -2676,7 +2678,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>GRUB, Kmod, Man-DB, Eudev</seg>
+          <seg>Eudev, GRUB, Kmod, and Man-DB</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>