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<para>
This book is divided into the following parts. Although there is a lot
of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read it
and not to mention the easiest way for me to maintain the book.
and, not to mention, the easiest way for me to maintain the book.
</para>
&pf-oz-organpart1;

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<para>
Part One gives you general information about this book (versions, where
to get it, changelog, mailinglists and how to get in touch with me).
to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me).
It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
read
before you start building an LFS system.
read before you start building an LFS system.
</para>
</sect2>

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more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens
between turning on your computer and seeing the command prompt, you want
to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO.
This HOWTO builds a bare system, in a similar way as this book does, but it
focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead of a complete
system.
This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book
uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead
of a complete system.
</para>
<para>
To decide whether you want to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, you could
ask yourself this question: Is my main objective to get a working Linux
system that I'm going to build myself and along the way learn and
learn what every component of a system is for, or is just the learning
part your main objective. If you want to build and learn, read this
book. If you just want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better
material to read.
ask yourself this question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux
system that I'm going to build myself and, along the way, learn what
every component of a system is for, or is just the learning part my main
objective?" If you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just
want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
</para>
<para>