diff --git a/chapter08/coreutils.xml b/chapter08/coreutils.xml index 34a41163e..77c6a7a92 100644 --- a/chapter08/coreutils.xml +++ b/chapter08/coreutils.xml @@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ sed -i 's/"1"/"8"/' /usr/share/man/man8/chroot.8 date - Displays the current dae and time in the given format, or sets the + Displays the current date and time in the given format, or sets the system date and time date diff --git a/chapter08/diffutils.xml b/chapter08/diffutils.xml index 8889077d5..2ffb9fa8c 100644 --- a/chapter08/diffutils.xml +++ b/chapter08/diffutils.xml @@ -79,8 +79,7 @@ cmp - Compares two files and reports whether or in which bytes they - differ + Compares two files and reports any differences byte by byte cmp diff --git a/chapter08/findutils.xml b/chapter08/findutils.xml index c37f3aab0..c12452668 100644 --- a/chapter08/findutils.xml +++ b/chapter08/findutils.xml @@ -23,10 +23,12 @@ - <para>The Findutils package contains programs to find files. These programs - are provided to recursively search through a directory tree and to + <para>The Findutils package contains programs to find files. Programs + are provided to search through all the files in a directory tree and to create, maintain, and search a database (often faster than the recursive - find, but is unreliable if the database has not been recently updated).</para> + find, but unreliable unless the database has been updated recently). + Findutils also supplies the <command>xargs</command> program, which + can be used to run a specified command on each file selected by a search.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> @@ -63,9 +65,9 @@ esac</userinput></screen> <varlistentry> <term><parameter>--localstatedir</parameter></term> <listitem> - <para>This option changes the location of the <command>locate</command> - database to be in <filename class="directory">/var/lib/locate</filename>, - which is FHS-compliant.</para> + <para>This option moves the <command>locate</command> + database to <filename class="directory">/var/lib/locate</filename>, + which is the FHS-compliant location.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/chapter08/groff.xml b/chapter08/groff.xml index 64739ac67..1b0870d9d 100644 --- a/chapter08/groff.xml +++ b/chapter08/groff.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ <title/> <para>The Groff package contains programs for processing and formatting - text.</para> + text and images.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ <varlistentry id="gperl"> <term><command>gperl</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Preprocesor for groff, allowing addition of perl code + <para>Preprocesor for groff, allowing the insertion of perl code into groff files</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-groff gperl"> <primary sortas="b-gperl">gperl</primary> @@ -179,8 +179,8 @@ <varlistentry id="gpinyin"> <term><command>gpinyin</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Preprocesor for groff, allowing addition of Chinese - European-like language Pinyin into groff files.</para> + <para>Preprocesor for groff, allowing the insertion of Pinyin + (Mandarin Chinese spelled with the Roman alphabet) into groff files.</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-groff gpinyin"> <primary sortas="b-gpinyin">gpinyin</primary> </indexterm> @@ -190,7 +190,8 @@ <varlistentry id="grap2graph"> <term><command>grap2graph</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Converts a grap diagram into a cropped bitmap image</para> + <para>Converts a grap program file into a cropped bitmap image + (grap is an old Unix programming language for creating diagrams)</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-groff grap2graph"> <primary sortas="b-grap2graph">grap2graph</primary> </indexterm> @@ -211,7 +212,7 @@ <term><command>grodvi</command></term> <listitem> <para>A driver for <command>groff</command> that produces TeX dvi - format</para> + format output files</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-groff grodvi"> <primary sortas="b-grodvi">grodvi</primary> </indexterm> diff --git a/chapter08/grub.xml b/chapter08/grub.xml index 08d2ac175..831041635 100644 --- a/chapter08/grub.xml +++ b/chapter08/grub.xml @@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ <para> If your system has UEFI support and you wish to boot LFS with UEFI, you can skip this package in LFS, - and install GRUB with UEFI support (and its dependencies) following - <ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/grub-efi.html">the BLFS page</ulink> - at the end of this chapter. + and install GRUB with UEFI support (and its dependencies) by following + the instructions on + <ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/grub-efi.html">the BLFS page</ulink>. </para> </note> @@ -56,9 +56,9 @@ <screen><userinput remap='pre'>unset {C,CPP,CXX,LD}FLAGS</userinput></screen> <para>Don't try <quote>tuning</quote> this package with custom - compilation flags: this package is a bootloader, with low-level - operations in the source code which is likely to be broken by some - aggressive optimizations.</para> + compilation flags. This package is a bootloader. The low-level + operations in the source code may be broken by + aggressive optimization.</para> </warning> <para>Prepare GRUB for compilation:</para> @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ <term><parameter>--disable-werror</parameter></term> <listitem> <para>This allows the build to complete with warnings introduced - by more recent Flex versions.</para> + by more recent versions of Flex.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ <term><parameter>--disable-efiemu</parameter></term> <listitem> <para>This option minimizes what is built by disabling a feature and - testing programs not needed for LFS.</para> + eliminating some test programs not needed for LFS.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ <screen><userinput remap="install">make install mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userinput></screen> - <para>Using GRUB to make your LFS system bootable will be discussed in + <para>Making your LFS system bootable with GRUB will be discussed in <xref linkend="ch-bootable-grub"/>.</para> </sect2> @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-bios-setup"> <term><command>grub-bios-setup</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Is a helper program for grub-install</para> + <para>Is a helper program for <command>grub-install</command></para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-bios-setup"> <primary sortas="b-grub-bios-setup">grub-bios-setup</primary> </indexterm> @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-editenv"> <term><command>grub-editenv</command></term> <listitem> - <para>A tool to edit the environment block</para> + <para>Is a tool to edit the environment block</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-editenv"> <primary sortas="b-grub-editenv">grub-editenv</primary> </indexterm> @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-file"> <term><command>grub-file</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Checks if FILE is of the specified type.</para> + <para>Checks to see if the given file is of the specified type</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-file"> <primary sortas="b-grub-file">grub-file</primary> </indexterm> @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-fstest"> <term><command>grub-fstest</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Tool to debug the filesystem driver</para> + <para>Is a tool to debug the filesystem driver</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-fstest"> <primary sortas="b-grub-fstest">grub-fstest</primary> </indexterm> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-glue-efi"> <term><command>grub-glue-efi</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Glue 32-bit and 64-bit binary into Apple universal one.</para> + <para>Glues 32-bit and 64-bit binaries into a single file (for Apple machines)</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-glue-efi"> <primary sortas="b-grub-glue-efi">grub-glue-efi</primary> </indexterm> @@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-install"> <term><command>grub-install</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Install GRUB on your drive</para> + <para>Installs GRUB on your drive</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-install"> <primary sortas="b-grub-install">grub-install</primary> </indexterm> @@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-kbdcomp"> <term><command>grub-kbdcomp</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Script that converts an xkb layout into one recognized by + <para>Is a script that converts an xkb layout into one recognized by GRUB</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-kbdcomp"> <primary sortas="b-grub-kbdcomp">grub-kbdcomp</primary> @@ -209,7 +209,8 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-macbless"> <term><command>grub-macbless</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Mac-style bless on HFS or HFS+ files</para> + <para>Is the Mac-style bless for HFS or HFS+ files (<command>bless</command> + is peculiar to Apple machiines; it makes a device bootable)</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-macbless"> <primary sortas="b-grub-macbless">grub-macbless</primary> </indexterm> @@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-mkconfig"> <term><command>grub-mkconfig</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Generate a grub config file</para> + <para>Generates a <filename>grub.cfg</filename> file</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-mkconfig"> <primary sortas="b-grub-mkconfig">grub-mkconfig</primary> </indexterm> @@ -240,7 +241,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-mkimage"> <term><command>grub-mkimage</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Make a bootable image of GRUB</para> + <para>Makes a bootable image of GRUB</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-mkimage"> <primary sortas="b-grub-mkimage">grub-mkimage</primary> </indexterm> @@ -291,7 +292,8 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-mkrescue"> <term><command>grub-mkrescue</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Make a bootable image of GRUB suitable for a floppy disk or CDROM/DVD</para> + <para>Makes a bootable image of GRUB suitable for a floppy disk, + CDROM/DVD, or a USB drive</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-mkrescue"> <primary sortas="b-grub-mkrescue">grub-mkrescue</primary> </indexterm> @@ -311,7 +313,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-ofpathname"> <term><command>grub-ofpathname</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Is a helper program that prints the path of a GRUB device</para> + <para>Is a helper program that prints the path to a GRUB device</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-ofpathname"> <primary sortas="b-grub-ofpathname">grub-ofpathname</primary> </indexterm> @@ -321,7 +323,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-probe"> <term><command>grub-probe</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Probe device information for a given path or device</para> + <para>Probes device information for a given path or device</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-probe"> <primary sortas="b-grub-probe">grub-probe</primary> </indexterm> @@ -341,7 +343,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-render-label"> <term><command>grub-render-label</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Render Apple .disk_label for Apple Macs</para> + <para>Renders Apple .disk_label for Apple Macs</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-render-label"> <primary sortas="b-grub-render-label">grub-render-label</primary> </indexterm> @@ -351,7 +353,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-script-check"> <term><command>grub-script-check</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Checks GRUB configuration script for syntax errors</para> + <para>Checks the GRUB configuration script for syntax errors</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-script-check"> <primary sortas="b-grub-script-check">grub-script-check</primary> </indexterm> @@ -381,7 +383,7 @@ mv -v /etc/bash_completion.d/grub /usr/share/bash-completion/completions</userin <varlistentry id="grub-syslinux2cfg"> <term><command>grub-syslinux2cfg</command></term> <listitem> - <para>Transform a syslinux config file into grub.cfg format</para> + <para>Transforms a syslinux config file into grub.cfg format</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-grub grub-syslinux2cfg"> <primary sortas="b-grub-syslinux2cfg">grub-syslinux2cfg</primary> </indexterm> diff --git a/chapter08/libffi.xml b/chapter08/libffi.xml index b5630a4dc..1877de101 100644 --- a/chapter08/libffi.xml +++ b/chapter08/libffi.xml @@ -53,7 +53,8 @@ value of the <parameter>--with-gcc-arch=</parameter> parameter in the following command to an architecture name fully implemented by the CPU on that system. - If this is not done, all applications that link to libffi will trigger + If this is not done, all applications that link to + <filename class='libraryfile'>libffi</filename> will trigger Illegal Operation Errors.</para> </note>