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chapter01/askforhelp.xml
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@ -44,20 +44,20 @@ problem.</para></note>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Configure Problems</title>
<title>Configure Script Problems</title>
<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the configure
script is run, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This
file may contain errors encountered during configure which were not
printed to the screen. Include those relevant lines if you need to ask
for help.</para>
<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the
<command>configure</command> script is run, review the
<filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may contain errors encountered
during <command>configure</command> which were not printed to the screen.
Include those relevant lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Compile Problems</title>
<title>Compilation Problems</title>
<para>Both the screen output and the contents of various files are
useful in determining the cause of compile issues. The screen output
useful in determining the cause of compilation issues. The screen output
from the <command>./configure</command> script and the
<command>make</command> run can be helpful. It
is not necessary to include the entire output, but do include enough

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chapter01/changelog.xml
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@ -107,6 +107,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>July 6th, 2005 [matt]: Several typo corrections, as suggested
by Bernard Leak.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>July 6th, 2005 [archaic]: Pulled the inetutils kernel header
patch out again as it is not needed.</para></listitem>

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chapter03/introduction.xml
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@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ and stabilized in the development version of the book.</para>
location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for
most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
alternate means of downloading discussed at <ulink
alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html"/>.</para>
<para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere

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chapter03/packages.xml
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@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
<note><para>File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
listed location. The site administrators of the master download
location occasionally remove older versions when new ones are
released. An alternate download location that may have the correct
released. An alternative download location that may have the correct
version available is <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
</listitem>
@ -345,8 +345,8 @@ url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
<para><ulink url="ftp://ftp.pld.org.pl/software/shadow/"/></para>
<note><para>Shadow (&shadow-version;) may no longer be available at the listed
location. The site administrators of the master download location occasionally
remove older versions when new ones are released. An alternate download location
that may have the correct version available is <ulink
remove older versions when new ones are released. An alternative download
location that may have the correct version available is <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>

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chapter06/udev.xml
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@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ the configuration files here:</para>
<!-- Edit Me -->
<para>Run the <command>udevstart</command> program to create our full
compliment of device nodes.</para>
complement of device nodes.</para>
<screen><userinput>/sbin/udevstart</userinput></screen>

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chapter07/introduction.xml
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@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/bsd-init.txt"/>.
Searching the LFS mailing lists for <quote>depinit</quote> will also offer
additional choices.</para>
<para>If using an alternate style of init scripts, skip this chapter
<para>If using an alternative style of init scripts, skip this chapter
and move on to <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.</para>
</sect1>

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prologue/audience.xml
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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<?dbhtml filename="audience.html"?>
<para>There are many reasons why somebody would want to read this
book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system
book. The principal reason is to install a Linux system
from the source code. A question many people raise is, <quote>why go
through all the hassle of manually building a Linux system from
scratch when you can just download and install an existing

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prologue/foreword.xml
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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?>
<para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and
installed my first distribution. After working with it for awhile, I
installed my first distribution. After working with it for a while, I
discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
For example, I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts or the way
programs were configured by default. I tried a number of alternative

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prologue/typography.xml
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@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ referenced.</para>
<screen><computeroutput>install-info: unknown option '--dir-file=/mnt/lfs/usr/info/dir'</computeroutput></screen>
<para>This form of text (fixed width text) shows screen output,
<para>This form of text (fixed-width text) shows screen output,
probably as the result of commands issued. This format is also used
to show filenames, such as
<filename>/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.</para>