From 00e4c9a31a282bfab22958a397b23d0515ea752d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Burgess Date: Tue, 30 May 2006 17:06:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Textual corrections from Chris Staub - dependency information is now in the appendix, not in chapter 6. Specific compiler optimisations are not provided so remove mentioning them. git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7635 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter06/introduction.xml | 11 +++++------ general.ent | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/chapter06/introduction.xml b/chapter06/introduction.xml index 588d84780..1a5e0aae4 100644 --- a/chapter06/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter06/introduction.xml @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ followed by concise descriptions of each program and library the package installed. - If using the compiler optimizations provided in this chapter, please + If using compiler optimizations, please review the optimization hint at . Compiler optimizations can make a program run slightly faster, but they may also cause compilation difficulties and problems when running the program. @@ -49,10 +49,9 @@ Before the installation instructions, each installation page provides information about the package, including a concise description of what it - contains, approximately how long it will take to build, how much disk space - is required during this building process, and any other packages needed to - successfully build the package. Following the installation instructions, - there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief descriptions of - these) that the package installs. + contains, approximately how long it will take to build, and how much disk + space is required during this building process. Following the installation + instructions, there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief + descriptions of these) that the package installs. diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent index 449b985ba..e593fc341 100644 --- a/general.ent +++ b/general.ent @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - - + +