From d02074e9bcb9c17a9364d86330738dbf4338d119 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 1 Nov 2021 08:49:48 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Minor wording change

---
 chapter08/glibc.xml | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/chapter08/glibc.xml b/chapter08/glibc.xml
index c0e89455c..fb81526cd 100644
--- a/chapter08/glibc.xml
+++ b/chapter08/glibc.xml
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 cd       build</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Ensure that the <command>ldconfig</command> and <command>sln</command>
-    utilites are installed into
+    utilites will be installed into
     <filename class="directory">/usr/sbin</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">echo "rootsbindir=/usr/sbin" &gt; configparms</userinput></screen>

From 56587fc43d410b72f1cad1c98ecb6663459d339e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 1 Nov 2021 12:05:41 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Make umounting explicit

---
 chapter11/reboot.xml | 22 +++++++++++++++++++++-
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/chapter11/reboot.xml b/chapter11/reboot.xml
index adf1a9f3e..9166a8c49 100644
--- a/chapter11/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter11/reboot.xml
@@ -84,10 +84,30 @@
   installation for the first time! First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
-
+<!-- We need to show the user the details...
   <para>Unmount the LFS file system hierarchy:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount -Rv $LFS</userinput></screen>
+-->
+
+  <para>Then unmount the virtual file systems:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS/dev/pts
+umount -v $LFS/dev
+umount -v $LFS/run
+umount -v $LFS/proc
+umount -v $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
+
+  <para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
+  partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
+
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS/usr
+umount -v $LFS/home
+umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
+
+  <para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
+
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>